Pain Passes

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By janiek13

Pain

Pain will crescendo and then it will pass,

It will rise and fall like the tide.

It is born small and becomes a giant mass

that makes you just want to hide.

It will gain on you till you can tolerate no more.

When everyone seems to judge you.

It makes you wonder what life is for,

Good moments for you are so few.

You heard it said, be careful for what you wish,

Words can be like a dagger.

The ocean floor rises up to meet me,

As toward the sea, I stagger.


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carolina muscle Level 1 Commenter 24 months ago

What a heartrending post!!

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janiek13 Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks! It has been a rough couple months.

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blackreign2012 Level 1 Commenter 24 months ago

NIce hub Rated you up ~hugs~

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janiek13 Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks much!

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James A Watkins Level 8 Commenter 24 months ago

Sad but good. Thank you for sharing your creative talents.

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janiek13 Hub Author 24 months ago

thanks for reading my poem

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Sun-Girl Level 2 Commenter 12 months ago

Good article but it really touched my heart and made me sad a kind of but i really enjoyed reading it.

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janiek13 Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you, it helps me to put my feelings into words, thanks for reading my hubs.

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kenneth avery Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

janiek13, GREAT hub. I rated the 'prescription drugs' hub great too, but this one, wow! Moves me. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

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